I see that they used the wrong tense for “described”, but that could be a typo. Other than that it seems grammatical to me. I guess “alluded to” and “described” are redundant, but that’s more a stylistic defect than an actual error imo.

Given the trends in AAA game releases these days, I think it’s smart to avoid preordering regardless of price point. It might be a good game in principle, but a technical disaster on launch.

It looks well made. Games Workshop seems to be making an effort to pick better developers and steer clear from the reputation Warhammer was developing for low quality games.

I don’t enjoy the AoS setting as much as WFB/40K, but its fans deserve some good adaptations of it and I hope they enjoy this one!